Tuesday, October 23, 2012

The Delphi Bloodline by Donna Del Oro - 3 Stars

It doesn't take an oracle to know that Donna Del Oro is destined for great things with her novel (and hopefully series) THE DELPHI BLOODLINE. The premise of the book has the perfect historical hook, and the ending leaves us waiting anxiously to see if another book is in our future.

THE DELPHI BLOODLINE tells the tale of Athena Butler - painter, gallery owner, and oh yeah, psychic - who attempts to prevent the kidnapping and deaths of other psychics across the U.S., including her mom, Annabella, and their distant relative, Lorena Skoros. Lorena sends her son, Kas, to act as Athena's Guardian, a role that men in the Delphi bloodline have been playing for millennia. In addition to dodging bullets, Athena and Kas have to deal with their attraction to one another as well as the emotional baggage they each carry.

Right away, THE DELPHI BLOODLINE grabs you with the idea that these women who have psychic abilities are part of a heritage that dates beyond biblical times and that the whole history of mankind - past, present, and future - is contained in another dimension that the women in the Delphi Bloodline can access. Ms Del Oro gives the reader just enough information about the psychics' abilities to let us know the framework, but not too much to be convoluted or to bog down the tempo of the book.

The development of the romantic relationship between Athena and Kas was, for the most part, well done. While the time frame is short, there are supernatural factors that connect them, making the romance believable. As for heat level, I would rate this a 3 out of 5.

There were some issues, though, with editing and contradictory facts - the way people are described - repetitive descriptions and narrations, as if old text wasn't removed during the revision. These issues posed a bit of a challenge at times, but I am SO glad I kept reading.

The ending of the book was fabulous. The immediate issues in the book are resolved, but danger still lurks, leaving the possibility (please!) of another novel. If the editing issues are resolved in the next novel (or in a re-publication of this one), this series could rival similar popular series found in mainstream bookstores.

Review originally written for The Romance Reviews:
http://www.theromancereviews.com/viewbooksreview.php?bookid=6748